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Hi, I wanted to hear from a therapist’s point of view any suggestion on my new website. Add/change/delete

www.si-olympia.com

 

Thanks!

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Looks great! Very professional and clean looking, I like the overall feel of the site. One recommendation I would give would be to shorten the image of the spine that sits below the navigation, so that more of your content is "above the fold"--meaning you don't have to scroll down the page to see the actual content of the site. Another suggestion I'd offer is to expand the information on your "About" page. You did a great job of talking about your education and the benefits of SI, but something I like to see as a client is more about the practitioner's philosophy, e.g. Why did you get into this field? What about this work resonates with your beliefs?

Overall though, it looks great!

Those are great suggestions! I will work on my about me page for sure. Thank you so much! I made it on wix.com , I had some professional photos yeasteday I should have up in a week or so.

Matt

 

The first thing that jumped out to me was the big typo on "Injuries", it should be Old and New Injuries rather than Old and New Injury's. And I think you should change the page title (the one that comes up in the top of the browser), at the moment it just says "structural" and it would be better for both the look of the page and for your search engine results if you change it to something like "Structural Integration Massage by Matt Murray". Even if it's not technically massage, that is the word a lot of clients will use to search, and if people don't know what SI is then having the word massage up there will help them. (I don't mean put it in the big headline on your home page, just in the browser title.)

But it looks really nice! I think it's a great site and nicely organized.

I think your site looks great. I agree with the suggestions above. Especially keeping content closer together from the header... I was using an iPad and with the large spine in the center it didn't look like there was any content loading on the page at first, so be aware of those using mobile devices. Also, are all your PDF links working? Not all opened, so maybe check on that... Otherwise, fantastic, may I hire you for mine? Lol... That is my project this month :-)

The biggest issue I see is the URL....the general public does not know what SI is. The people who would benefit from SI are going to punch in the word "massage" when they're seeking services.

WOW thanks everyone, these are all great suggestions, Its always hard to proof your own stuff especially when you stare at it for hours

I changed that one right away LOL



Carrie Patrick said:

The first thing that jumped out to me was the big typo on "Injuries", it should be Old and New Injuries rather than Old and New Injury's. And I think you should change the page title (the one that comes up in the top of the browser), at the moment it just says "structural" and it would be better for both the look of the page and for your search engine results if you change it to something like "Structural Integration Massage by Matt Murray". Even if it's not technically massage, that is the word a lot of clients will use to search, and if people don't know what SI is then having the word massage up there will help them. (I don't mean put it in the big headline on your home page, just in the browser title.)

But it looks really nice! I think it's a great site and nicely organized.

this is good to know, Hope I can change it, ill try. Thank you
 
Julie Casson said:

I think your site looks great. I agree with the suggestions above. Especially keeping content closer together from the header... I was using an iPad and with the large spine in the center it didn't look like there was any content loading on the page at first, so be aware of those using mobile devices. Also, are all your PDF links working? Not all opened, so maybe check on that... Otherwise, fantastic, may I hire you for mine? Lol... That is my project this month :-)

Yeah I can understand that, I am so booked most my
clients come from referrals anyway, I use tag words in my website such as
massage therapy and list in massage section on Google.

 
Laura Allen said:

The biggest issue I see is the URL....the general public does not know what SI is. The people who would benefit from SI are going to punch in the word "massage" when they're seeking services.

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